With结构的正确用法

在英语中，“with+宾语+介词短语”可作为独立主格结构，在句中充当状语或定语，使表达更简洁、生动。例如

1.With a book in his hand, the teacher walked into the classroom.

老师拿着一本书走进了教室。

2. Book in hand, the teacher walked into the classroom. (with可以省略)

老师手拿着书走进了教室。

3.I like books with pictures in them.

我喜欢里面有图的书。

今天推荐的原创英文句子中，有些地方略显杂乱，如果适当运用这一结构，可以让表达更加简洁流畅。感谢作者提供的真实语境材料。看看原文吧，你能发现几个问题？

一，我发现的问题

二，分析问题并修改

（一）逻辑主语不清楚，根据语境，可以用with结构。

With the book as a present from his father, the boy can celebrate his 10th birthday in a special way.

（二）due to是个介词短语，不能接句子，可以改为as或because；

I believe he will be interested in reading this book because topics with colorful pictures on them are his favorite.

最后修改版本如下

With the book as a present from his dad, the boy can celebrate his 10th birthday in a special way. I believe he will be interested in reading this book because topics with colorful pictures on them are his favorite.

把爸爸送的这本书作为礼物，这个男孩可以用一种特别的方式庆祝他的10岁生日。我相信他会喜欢读这本书，因为那些带有五彩缤纷插图的话题是他最喜爱的内容。

思考题[微风][烟花]有错就改。

1.With a baby behind her, Mary was working in the field.

2.We write by pens.

3.Tom likes stamps have pictures on them.