写英语题为Letter Celebrating SuLin 3rd Birthday & Express Gratitude

文/刘宝彩/天津

写作已知条件如下:假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭戈(San Diego)动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的妈妈“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写封信:

1 自我介绍;2 祝贺苏琳生日;3 感谢工作人员;4索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

此内容来源于20--年全国高考英语作文I卷。本文作者使用“不考模板考逻辑”方法，写英语作文，通过“左找原因，右找结果”思路完成写作。所以同一内容不同表达的两篇英语作文写作如下。

第一篇英语作文

Dear Sirs,

I, one of panda lovers, write you a letter telling you that pandas have been my all-time favorite, This causes me as a Chinese high-school student to let you know that the information on your pandas is of great concern to me.

They are made known to me by your website about their growth together with lives, So I must thank you for your care services available to them, especially to a baby panda, sullen by name.when born 3 years ago in San Diego zoo, together with to her mum as well.

This means now Sullen the small baby quickly grows into a3-year-old big panda, whom I congratulate on her many happy returns of her birthday through you, And I will enjoy seeing them so much eagerly that you kindly advise me whether there is possibility for you to have her new photo taken and sent to me, accordingly.

I look forward to your favorable reply to me soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua.

中译文

尊敬的先生们：

我是李华，一名中国高中生，也是一位热情的熊猫爱好者。从小我就对大熊猫情有独钟。自从三年前“苏琳”在圣迭戈动物园出生，我就一直通过你们动物园的网站密切关注着她和她妈妈“白云”的成长。

我想为“苏琳”即将到来的三岁生日送上最热烈的祝贺。通过网站上的信息和图片，见证她从一只小小幼崽成长为一只可爱的幼年大熊猫，这真的太令人惊喜了。

我由衷地感谢你们工作人员为照顾“苏琳”和“白云”所付出的所有关爱与努力。你们专业的照料确保了她们健康成长、生活幸福，这让我倍感欣慰与感激。

我想询问一下，是否有可能给我发送一些“苏琳”三岁生日的照片。如果能拥有这些珍贵的回忆，我会非常开心。我相信这些照片不仅能满足我对她的思念之情，还能让我与同样喜爱大熊猫的朋友们分享她的可爱模样。

非常感谢您抽出时间阅读这封信，期待您的早日回复。

您真诚的，

李华

第二篇英语作文

Dear Sirs,

I'm Li Hua, a Chinese high school student and an enthusiastic panda lover, holding pandas a special place in my heart. That brings me to have closely followed the growth of the panda "Su Lin" and her mother "Bai Yun", through your zoo's website, ever since Su Lin was born three years ago in San Diego Zoo.

On Su Lin's upcoming third birthday today, I'd like to extend my warmest congratulations now, that leaves me truly in amazement at her growth from a tiny cub into a lovely young panda, through the information and pictures on your website.

I sincerely appreciate all the care and efforts that you staff have dedicated to taking care of Su Lin and Bai Yun, to ensure pandas of their healthy growth and happy life, which makes me feel very relieved and grateful.

I'm wondering whether you could get me some photos of Su Lin on her third birthday you send me to, if possibly, with these precious memories to keep in my belief that these photos will not only satisfy my longing to see her but also allow me to share her charm with my friends who also love pandas.

I'm looking forward to your early reply to me on my request as above with my many thanks to you so much.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

中译文

我是李华，一名中国高中生，同时也是热忱的熊猫爱好者，熊猫在我心中占据着特殊的位置。自从三年前“苏琳”在圣地亚哥动物园出生起，我就通过贵动物园的网站密切关注着它和它的母亲“白云”的成长。

在苏琳即将迎来三岁生日之际（也就是今天），我想送上最热烈的祝贺。通过网站上的信息和照片，我真切地惊叹于它从一只幼崽成长为可爱青年熊猫的过程。

我衷心感谢贵园工作人员为照顾苏琳和白云所付出的所有心血与努力，是你们确保了熊猫们健康成长、生活幸福，这让我倍感安心与感激。

我想询问是否可能请您提供一些苏琳三岁生日当天的照片，这些珍贵的纪念不仅能满足我想见它的心愿，也能让我与同样喜爱熊猫的朋友们分享它的魅力。

期待您能尽早回复上述请求，再次深表感谢！

此致,敬礼

李华

总结：

《英语写作题为A Letter to Celebrate Su Lin's Third Birthday and Express Gratitude》分享了“不考模板考逻辑”写英语作文的方法，解决了“没词写，有词不知怎么写”的困扰，战胜中式思维写英语的问题如此写出原创英语作文范文。其思路观点、论据，通过工具和技术而提炼和找出——工具涉及“两图三表”;技术是用“2原因←1 主题→>3结果→4 措施”的方法写作。

这是李华写给美国圣迭戈动物园工作人员的一封信。李华表明自己是一名热爱大熊猫的中国高中生，长期通过动物园网站关注大熊猫“苏琳”和她的妈妈“白云”。信中，李华首先祝贺“苏琳”即将到来的三岁生日，接着感谢工作人员对“苏琳”和“白云”的悉心照料，最后请求工作人员发送“苏琳”三岁生日的照片，希望能留存这些珍贵回忆，并期待对方早日回复。

编辑语：

《英语写作题为A Letter to Celebrate Su Lin's Third Birthday and Express Gratitude》这篇作文紧扣题目要求，以真诚的语言表达了对大熊猫“苏琳”的喜爱与祝福，以及对动物园工作人员的感激之情。文章逻辑清晰，层次分明，从介绍自己和表达关注，到祝贺生日、感谢工作人员，再到提出索取照片的请求，过渡自然流畅。语言表达准确且得体，既避免了中式英语的生硬，又展现了较好的英语写作功底，是一篇符合高考要求的优秀英语作文范例。有需求考生可寻求该文作者助一臂之力。