学生用逻辑树模型写题为Introduction to the School Library英语作文

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写作已知条件如下:假设你是李华，应英国朋友Bob的要求，请你写一封短信介绍你校围书馆的基本情况，内容包括内容:1图书馆的位置。前有花园，后又教学楼:2 内部环境:宽敞有书架报刊、书籍:3 图书馆功能，借阅及其数量和期限:4开放时间。

注意:1.词数 100个;要点齐全，行2文连贯，可适当发挥;B短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

20--年全国高考英语作文1卷，以同一内容不同表达形式写作如下两篇英语作文。

其使用方法是——不靠“模板”靠逻辑，写英语作文“左找原因，右找结果”思路图完成写作。

第一篇英语作文

June 8, 20--.

Dear Bob,

I thank you for your last letter asking me for the information about the library this school. That helps you with improvement in acquiring your lessons-related knowledge convenient to you in future.

You are enabled to know that in front and behind the library are garden and teaching buildings respectively. This makes readers pleased in the environmentally-friendly place.You feel library, where environment remain really pleasant, is wide in space and bright in light.

In the library you may choose subject-related books, if interesting to you, together with magazines put on B multi-shelves. This means it is convenient to you to borrow 2-3 books or magazines one time, without exceeding more than 2 weeks at time you are allowed to read.

You are reminded of that the library is open (to readers) a.m.9:00 and close p.m.9:00 a day from Mon. to Fri. during the time you are welcome to the library in the school where you could have good study and spare leisure, in my view.

Best wishes,

Li Hua.

中译文：

亲爱的鲍勃：

我写信是为了按你上一封信的要求，告诉你一些关于我们学校图书馆的情况。

我们的图书馆位于一个美丽的地方。它前面有一个可爱的花园，后面是一栋教学楼。这里的环境非常宜人。

图书馆内部宽敞明亮。有各种各样的书架，上面摆满了各种各样的报纸、杂志和书籍。无论你是对学习相关的资料感兴趣，还是只是想阅读消遣，你都能在这里找到你喜欢的东西。

你一次可以借2到3本书或杂志，并且需要在两周内归还。这能让每个人都有机会享用这些资源。

图书馆在工作日（周一至周五）的开放时间是从上午9点到晚上9点。我觉得这是一个学习和休闲的好地方。

祝好，

李华

第二篇英语作文

Dear Bob,

I’m writing to tell you something about the library of our school as you asked, in your last letter, indicating that it is located in a beautiful place, which is a lovely garden in front of it, and a teaching building behind.

Its environment here is really pleasant——inside the library, it is spacious and bright——there are various bookshelves filled with a wide range of newspapers, magazines, and books. Accordingly, whether you are interested in study-related materials or just want to read for fun, you can find what you like here.

You could be allowed to borrow 2 to 3 books or magazines once, which needs to return within two weeks. This ensures that everyone can have the opportunity to enjoy these resources at time, when the library is open from 9:00 a.m. to 9:00 p.m. on weekdays (Monday to Friday), having been regarded as a great place for study and leisure, in my view.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

总结：

《咋采用“逻辑树”模型写题为Introduction to the School Library英语作文》这封信是李华应英国朋友Bob的要求，介绍自己学校图书馆的情况。内容包括图书馆的位置（前有花园，后有教学楼）、内部宽敞明亮且有丰富藏书的环境、借阅数量（一次2 - 3本）和期限（两周内归还）以及开放时间（周一至周五上午9点到晚上9点）,环境宜人。文中使用语法正确，句子高档，句子结构优化和词汇表达讲究，增强句子间的逻辑连贯性。例如：

第一篇中使用：That helps you with improvement …You are enabled to know that …This makes readers pleased in… library, where environment remain really pleasant, is …This means it is … without exceeding more than 2 weeks at time you are allowed to read… school where you could have good study and spare leisure, in my view…

第二篇中使用： indicating that it is located in a beautiful place, which is … Its environment here is really pleasant——inside the library, it is spacious and bright——there are various bookshelves…Accordingly, whether you are interested in study-related materials or just want to … magazines which need to return within two weeks. This ensures that … at time, when the library is open … having been regarded as a great place …

编辑语：

《学生用“逻辑树”模型写题为Introduction to the School Library英语作文》一文阐述：写信围绕学校图书馆的基本情况展开，结构清晰，要点齐全。从地理位置到内部环境，再到借阅规则和开放时间，都进行了简洁明了的介绍，适合作为向他人介绍场所的范例，语言表达自然流畅，能够很好地完成信息传递的任务。这两篇不同形式英语写作，使用了“因果推导”的思维方法——围绕提示点寻找原因和结果及其措施内容——利用英语逻辑单句和逻辑组句，借助“暗”逻辑连接词，如不定式、过去分词、现在分词等，来体现句子之间的逻辑关系。还采用“逻辑树”模型，以中心论点为树干，通过因果、对比等逻辑分支展开有效论证。为此得高分，假期有学生需求得高分者，本文可助其一臂之力。